“MUUUUUUMMM!!!! I want to go trick or treating NOW!!!!!! All my friends are going why can’t I !” moaned a spoilt little brat named Victoria.
“Because I said so!” her mother groaned
“THAT'S NOT FAIR!!!!!!!!” screamed Victoria
“Well you’re not going anyway, I’ve already paid for your 5 dance lessons, horse riding, piano lessons and the cruise around the world, we are having a quiet night tonight live with it” as her mother walked off. Victoria slipped out the front door dressed as a vampire and disappeared into the crowd. Her mother walked up stairs to give Victoria kiss and found her bed empty she walked outside and found her crying on the pavement.
“What's wrong sweetie” she asked gently
“Everyone had already finished trick or treating so i was alone but i didn’t want to come inside”
“it s ok hon”
Hello Niamh
ReplyDeleteYou do a great job here at using dialogue and constructing an exciting story. Well done - it's enjoyable to read and packs in a lot of emotions!